Revisit the table in
Q 1 you have not identified the two organ systems within.100 words
Q 2 part 2 – you don’t really focus on the requirements of the cell. Focus on things like cell respiration and the substances and waste products the muscles cells will need to respire. How do the organ systems provide the cells with the raw materials for respiration.100 words?
Q 3. You need to cover the processes of thermoregulation. More detail around effectors and how they increase/decrease body temperature 400 words
Q 4-part 1 regulation of blood glucose needs more technical language detail. Research A level website/text book to include level 3 detail required around how insulin and glucagon initiate processes to decrease/increase blood glucose levels. 300 word
AQ 5-part 1 b should be describing the function of endocrine system. 80 words