Purpose & Audience: Make the opening information in the introduction more specific. Why do teachers need this information? What are you hoping teachers will do with this information?
Thesis: Add a thesis that explicitly lists the main points you cover in the essay.
Conclusion: Develop the conclusion a bit more. Aim for 5-6 sentences summarizing what you presented in the body of the essay.
Sources: Add quotation marks to the information from the CDC and Gomez.
