What did you like about the submission? What would you recommend gets changed or updated? Provide suggestions and other points of view

Comment and provide substantive feedback to at least 2 other peers in the class. Feedback may include comments on formatting and mechanics, such as APA, grammar, punctuation and spelling, as well as content-related feedback. What did you like about the submission? What would you recommend gets changed or updated? Provide suggestions and other points of view