States the purpose or problem ambiguously and/or with excessive detail.
Approach-Measuring the “Size of the shell” was not part of the approach.
Describes the approach with excessive detail or omits a key component of the approach. Findings- Be more specific in description of findings.
Explain what temperature were in the same range in the morning hours and which specific areas did not experience stratification.
Describes many findings without clearly identifying which is the major finding or describes findings too generally or with insufficient precision to be meaningful
