Section 1 (65%, PASS): Discuss the issues facing a disadvantaged group in the UK. Outline the impact these issues have on health and wellbeing.
Describe any barriers to care and how these may be overcome.You have identified a disadvantaged group (people who are homeless) and discussed the issues facing this group in the UK.
added an in-text comment about the address issue – homeless people may struggle to register without an address (you could provide a link to the literature regarding this) but it is not a requirement to have a fixed address. You have described some ways in which barriers to care can be overcome.
Section 2 (49%, FAIL): Define the role of the third sector in the UK in relation to health and wellbeing. Using examples evaluate the role of the third sector in the UK in relation to the group identified in section 1 You have written a clear definition of the third sector and started to consider the link between the third sector and the NHS/social care services, although the referencing here is ambiguous.There is little evaluation of the third sector in this section. You have described the role/aims of two third sector organisations, however in this piece you should be evaluating the role of the third sector using an appropriate selection of literature and relevant examples.
Section 3 (65%, PASS):Describe the role of your placement organisation in promotion of mental and physical well being for the group identified in section 1 and reflect on your learning and placement experience.You have described the role of your placement organisation with regards to your disadvantaged group. You have reflected on your experiences and the role of TSOs in promotion of health and well being. To improve, you could have considered some implications for your future study or practice as a doctor.
Section 4: General (49%, FAIL): Spelling, grammar and referencing; adherence to word count.
Section 1 over word count (580 words excluding in-text citations). Multiple errors in reference list. In some places, there is ambiguous in-text citations. Some grammatical and phrasing errors. See my in-text comments.
