Do you find any parts of the topic submission confusing? Do you have any helpful, constructive suggestions about how to make the topic submission even more engaging/interesting?

Peer Review on Topic Submission

You are asked to peer review the student’s topic submissions below. For the topic submission,  respectfully comment on:
What parts of the topic submission do you like?
Do you think the topic is under-appreciated or under reported?  Or has it been reported on recently?
Do you find any parts of the topic submission confusing?
Do you have any helpful, constructive suggestions about how to make the topic submission even more engaging/interesting?
What would you like to know more about the topic?